I've watched this series since you started uploading it and I have to say thats its pretty entertaining. the voice acting is really good. the story is interesting and all the comedy is on point. i'll be honest the characters are a bit cliche' but that's not really the downside. Their personalities are all somewhat relatable cause their normal people. in contrast to the dot hack series were everyone's OVERLY dramatic and absorbed in their emotional problems within the world.
If I had to pick out one bad thing from your series it's that the character designs and thier presentation are a little weak. I don't mind how the world looks, but the the characters look really quickly thrown together. Alphas the hero but his overall look is kind of a mess. This is all just my opinion and i have no problems with people disagreeing with me. When it comes to flash I really cant do any better myself. I just thought it was worth bringing up in case you wanted to improve the show at some point.
in any case I'm really entertained and I think your doing a great job. keep it up and I look forward to the next installment.
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